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:icondogcanjump:
Here we go again.
Another bunch of ugly lookin' random images which happen to be my entry for the Wacom: Bring Your Vision to Life - Dreams Contest.

Brush, ink, Photoshop, some Painter... whatever...
As you can see from this piece my dream is to really suck at drawing. As you can also see my dream came through. Haha.
The font used is Anime Ace.


P.S. Just for the record this has nothing to do with any of that emo stuff or whatever it's called.
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*Sol-Caninus Mar 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
Powerful. Technically clever, too, the way you move the eye across the page.
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*Sol-Caninus Mar 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
:thumbsup: I thank you for the free instruction!
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*Sol-Caninus Mar 6, 2013   Traditional Artist
In hindsight, what would you think about reversing the angle of the razor so it directs the eye from the top left corner of the panel to the bottom right? (i.e. using the same device as panel 2 with the downward, rightward turning head) This way, 1) it would not be repeated by the angle of the hand (the two images are parallel, so redundant)and 2) it would lead into the next panel at the bottom, where the read would flow upward to the face of the seated figure to the right?

don't mean to pick at it. These are things I'm studying, so look for insight on the decision making process, as far as it may go, and any thoughts or comments, in general. :thumbsup:
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:icondogcanjump:
You make a good point. Didn't think of it back then even though I try to avoid parallel images and stuff like that. I tried and flipped the image: [link] What do you think?
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*Sol-Caninus Mar 6, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you for replying.
Definitely! That zig-zag line of flow leads a lot better. The other one interrupts the flow (but that could have been for a purpose I didn't know about - so had to ask.)

Man. Hope I didn't put you out. (I gotta be careful about what I say. People starting to take me seriously.)

Anyway. What do you think? Which way works better for your creative vision?
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:icondogcanjump:
No worries. :) I'm usually clueless about these things so any advice is welcomed. Not sure why I placed that image the way I did, I guess it felt right at the time. After looking at it I think your way works much better, makes more sense.
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I love the rawness of this piece :) Any plans to add more pages?
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:icondogcanjump:
Thank you. I will certainly try.:)
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